Fiction developmental editing & manuscript assessment
I specalise in cozy crime/mystery and commercial fiction, helping authors to strengthen their manuscripts for publication.
The Power of Editing
Writing a novel takes time, focus, and commitment; shaping a story into its strongest form can be challenging. What makes it even more difficult is maintaining an objective perspective from inside the work.
As the author, you carry the full story in your mind, which can make it hard to see where there may be a need for more clarity or emphasis. Plot logic, pacing, character arcs, and narrative focus often become clearer with fresh eyes, particularly after multiple drafts.
Developmental editing offers a thoughtful, professional assessment of your manuscript at the story level. It highlights what’s working, where the narrative can be refined, and how focused revisions can help bring the story fully to life.
Editing Services
Manuscript Assessment
Clear, big-picture feedback on your story’s structure, pacing, characters, and overall flow. It’s designed to help you understand what’s working, what needs attention, and how to approach your next round of revisions with confidence.
Full Developmental Edit
Hands-on support to help shape and strengthen your manuscript at the story level. A much more deeper and detailed look in plot, character arcs, pacing, and clarity to make sure the story on the page matches the one you’re trying to tell.
Refining your opening so it draws readers in from the very first page. You’ll receive feedback on voice, pacing, and tension, helping you start your story with clarity and impact.
Free First Chapter Edit
Here's what our customers say
”Every day, they strive to improve their service to the clients by developing the right blend of technology and creativity to make sure every job done is done as efficiently as possible.”
- Clarice Turner
”Every day, they strive to improve their service to the clients by developing the right blend of technology and creativity to make sure every job done is done as efficiently as possible.”
- Brian Moten
About Me
Hi, I’m Hali, I specialise in developmental editing for cozy crime and commercial fiction, helping authors bring out the best in their stories while staying true to their own voice. I’m passionate about story clarity and love helping writers step back from their manuscripts, see the bigger picture, and make confident, informed decisions during revision.
I know how hard it can be to look at your own work with fresh eyes, this is where I come in. I take a reader-focused perspective, highlighting what’s working well, where the narrative could be clearer, and how plot, pacing, and character arcs can be strengthened to make your story as engaging as possible.
I work collaboratively and respectfully, giving clear, practical feedback that guides and supports you without rewriting your story. My goal is to help you shape your manuscript into the strongest version of itself while keeping your unique voice at the heart of it.
Whether you’re revising a first draft or polishing a manuscript that has already been through multiple rounds of edits, I’m here to provide an honest assessment and encouragement every step of the way.
What motivates me is working with authors to shape their stories with clarity and confidence. With a keen eye for detail and a genuine love of storytelling, I’ll partner with you to refine your manuscript so it feels polished and true to your voice.